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Assessment: Production Draft 1

Task	What I can do to improve
Production Draft 1	Cover: *Plan the fonts and sizes you use more carefully. Find fonts that are different but look good together. A good tip is to have the same font and size for all the puffs except for the anchorage text which should stand out on the page. *Does your magazine have a slogan? How will the audience know that this is a new country magazine? *The artist needs to appear bigger on the page.
	Contents: *You have many different fonts on the page – they need to be smaller and there needs to be more cohesion across them all. Have a look at some professional examples – they all keep the same font and size across the page. *What are the different sections of your magazine? *Some of your contents are very vague – tell me who the interviews are with and not simply ‘upcoming artists’.
	Article: *Can you make the introduction to the article stand out more? Play around with the layout of the page to make it more interesting and draw the audience in. *You need to edit the photographs more – they are quite dark. Use exposure, brightness and colour adjustments to make the images more attractive. *There is room on the last page for a pull quote on the image.

Production Level/Mark: Level 2 35/60